After jiggling around a bit, he realizes he can now open the door and might be able to get his freedom and so he does. He realizes what happens and then starts to play around a bit with it. He presses a button which creates radiation in the box to give him some sort of power that denies gravity and conjure swords up. Then he came back on a mount with a remote. Then his captor, who was a ninja used a smoke bomb and disappeared. Well the protagonist was a slave and forced into the box. It isn't as good as other animations but I try. I was just doing an animation but it isn't the best. It would be, and is, a disservice to just tell a beginner only positive things. There's a lot of potential here and I sincerely think you should build on it. Keep working at it and improving with every step. I was at least never confused as to what was happening in the moment.Īs the thread tag shows, I realize you're a beginner, so I don't want to be discouraging. Given all that, you definitely conveyed the actions that are taking place. There are a few things that don't have a purpose and could be removed or better integrated into a fluid story. The protagonist seemed like they were never really in any danger and just went along with everything that was happening. Then, the floating captor shows back up, becomes some kind of Shiva impersonator, the protagonist manifests another sword, kills the Shiva (who turns back to normal), then the protagonist flies off. The protagonist bounces around for a bit, then manifests swords and fires them into a wall, but then magically/psionically open the opposing wall meaning they could have done this the whole time. Then, another captor zooms in and takes away the boxes internal gravity.for reasons.

The protagonist is led into a box, but their captor explodes, only they still enter despite no longer being forced. The story is a little all over the place.

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